When it doesn't fit anywhere else

 #26569  by LazyLightnin
 
Seems rather emo to me
LOL, just anytime someone mentions emo i crack up, LOL

 #26583  by IamDocWatson
 
a little too pin pointey not poetic enough...

u want it to be able to be interperated diferently by everyone...otherwise it will only relate to people inb this exact situations...its also a little elementary....

kinda seems like some mydland tune

 #26588  by strumminsix
 
IamDocWatson wrote:a little too pin pointey not poetic enough...

u want it to be able to be interperated diferently by everyone...otherwise it will only relate to people inb this exact situations...its also a little elementary....
Very well said!
IamDocWatson wrote: kinda seems like some mydland tune
I can see that. Brent had a knack of bordering / teetering on being "too pin pointey"

 #26593  by razmablues
 
this is great feedback, thank you for giving me your honest opinion. i'm no song writer, but i want to start practicing, gotta start somewhere!! :smile: