PostPosted:Wed Oct 10, 2007 3:29 pm
Seems rather emo to meLOL, just anytime someone mentions emo i crack up, LOL
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I wanna hear some opinions on these lyrics
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PostPosted:Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:35 pm
a little too pin pointey not poetic enough...
u want it to be able to be interperated diferently by everyone...otherwise it will only relate to people inb this exact situations...its also a little elementary....
kinda seems like some mydland tune
u want it to be able to be interperated diferently by everyone...otherwise it will only relate to people inb this exact situations...its also a little elementary....
kinda seems like some mydland tune
PostPosted:Wed Oct 10, 2007 7:50 pm
IamDocWatson wrote:a little too pin pointey not poetic enough...Very well said!
u want it to be able to be interperated diferently by everyone...otherwise it will only relate to people inb this exact situations...its also a little elementary....
IamDocWatson wrote: kinda seems like some mydland tuneI can see that. Brent had a knack of bordering / teetering on being "too pin pointey"
PostPosted:Wed Oct 10, 2007 9:06 pm
this is great feedback, thank you for giving me your honest opinion. i'm no song writer, but i want to start practicing, gotta start somewhere!! 