[GratefulPat]

apparently a buddy of mine posted a first take of this song, considering it was the first time that day without any editing or practicing its alright. a little off key at parts of the chorus but let me get some comments please
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xhE4X-jfs_Y#GU5U2spHI_4[/img]

[weirimpressed]

sounds alright, hes got the main idea down
is he singing or just standing in front of the mic?

[GratefulPat]

thats me, and singing... just before the rest of my band showed , i was kinda just getting through a number of songs so once everyone else showed up i wasnt the one forgetting my part

[weirimpressed]

gotcha, its sounds pretty good man post another clip of it with the band though

[Billbbill]

Sounds pretty good. Your licks sound good as well. Keep it up. I was having trouble telling what was what until you started with the fills.

[CaptainTrips]

Sounds good. But personally I like to treat the quick change to C more subtly.