[bucketorain]

Hello my bretheren. I am looking for some constructive critisim on my new web page...www.otrpresents.ca



please let me know what you think. thanks!

sincerely,

[jck_strw]

Some quick constructive thoughts (this is all on a Mac using Firefox):

--Contact Us and Booking Inquiries seem to be the same thing. Seems redundant. I think a Contact Us should be sufficient.

--Your header graphic is cool, but there's a "split" in it. Where the header banner ends and the cool graphic on the right begins, there's a vertical line.

--The cool-ass graphic on the right "drops" like a half inch below the header banner. Not sure if that's by design. I think it would like cleaner to be even with the double yellow line of the header banner.

Overall, it looks good.

[Rev_Roach]

good looking site. "talent" is misspelled on the first page (tallent)

[jck_strw]

I didn't read the text. Availability is also misspelled.

[shakedown_04092]

good looking site. "talent" is misspelled on the first page (tallent)

Talent is spelled "talent", so unless he already fixed it, I'm confused. And along w/ what jck_strw said about the 2 pages being identical, it looks good.

[GratefulPat]

looks good, what everyone else said and i must agree those header is nice

[nicolasalk]

i liked it

[Rev_Roach]

good looking site. "talent" is misspelled on the first page (tallent)

Talent is spelled "talent", so unless he already fixed it, I'm confused. And along w/ what jck_strw said about the 2 pages being identical, it looks good.

It's been fixed tallent became talent. I can see how my sentence kind of said the opposite of what i meant, misused punctuation.