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New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:41 pm
by 1960strat
Any and all feedback appreciated....

www.myspace.com/davidfixband

Re: New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:03 am
by Highballin'
Song starts out really good. I like the mood. The vibe. The guitar over the top of that groove has to be refined some. It may just be too loud. It may need to be more melodic, less attack and free-flow.
Try taking some of the punch out of it. Volume lower.
I wouldn't have replied if I thought it was worthless. Sorry to give criticism. I really like the groove, and finding the right guitar over the top of that groove is essential.
8)

Re: New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:46 am
by tapestry
Dave - great groove!

the only thing I would say constructively is to lower the lead in the mix...

Rock on brotha!

Re: New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Sat Dec 05, 2009 7:20 pm
by 1960strat
i guess all that time at the garden watching phish this week killed my ears because you are right, the mix is all outta wack. Also, i think i will re-record the guitar solo to make it more mellow in the beginning. This will likely end up an intro to another song, but i do appreciate the feedback.

David

Re: New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:34 am
by Highballin'
Give us another taste soon. I'd like to see where you go with it. Peace Bro. :peas:

Re: New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:10 am
by 1960strat
I reposted a new version of the song. Hopefully it is mixed better and has a more mellow vibe ala Qtron.

Re: New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:39 am
by Tennessee Jedi
Checking it out now ....
Sounds nice and spacey
Very cool
:smile:

Re: New tune: Exhale - work in progress

PostPosted:Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:13 pm
by Highballin'
Wicked :!: That's hitting a sweet spot.