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LOOKING FOR SOME FEEDBACK
PostPosted:Mon Dec 03, 2007 8:50 pm
by bucketorain
Hello my bretheren. I am looking for some constructive critisim on my new web page...
www.otrpresents.ca
please let me know what you think. thanks!
sincerely,
PostPosted:Mon Dec 03, 2007 9:44 pm
by jck_strw
Some quick constructive thoughts (this is all on a Mac using Firefox):
--Contact Us and Booking Inquiries seem to be the same thing. Seems redundant. I think a Contact Us should be sufficient.
--Your header graphic is cool, but there's a "split" in it. Where the header banner ends and the cool graphic on the right begins, there's a vertical line.
--The cool-ass graphic on the right "drops" like a half inch below the header banner. Not sure if that's by design. I think it would like cleaner to be even with the double yellow line of the header banner.
Overall, it looks good.
PostPosted:Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:21 am
by Rev_Roach
good looking site. "talent" is misspelled on the first page (tallent)
PostPosted:Tue Dec 04, 2007 12:22 pm
by jck_strw
I didn't read the text. Availability is also misspelled.
PostPosted:Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:27 pm
by shakedown_04092
Rev_Roach wrote:good looking site. "talent" is misspelled on the first page (tallent)
Talent is spelled "talent", so unless he already fixed it, I'm confused. And along w/ what jck_strw said about the 2 pages being identical, it looks good.
PostPosted:Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:08 pm
by GratefulPat
looks good, what everyone else said and i must agree those header is nice
PostPosted:Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:38 pm
by nicolasalk
i liked it
PostPosted:Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:40 pm
by Rev_Roach
shakedown_04092 wrote:Rev_Roach wrote:good looking site. "talent" is misspelled on the first page (tallent)
Talent is spelled "talent", so unless he already fixed it, I'm confused. And along w/ what jck_strw said about the 2 pages being identical, it looks good.
It's been fixed tallent became talent. I can see how my sentence kind of said the opposite of what i meant, misused punctuation.