Diggin it Bro! That's the first Dead Tune I learned to play. I can't do half as good as you.
If vocals are your thing you might want to round out some of those edges a little.
If you already hear what I'm talking about- good. Practice it up. Some of those high bits you might wanna try singing more like Bob than Jerry.
The guitar sounded great!
"...and when your fingers find her she drowns you in her body, carving deep blue ripples in the tissues of your mind..."