i just wrote some lyrics to a song give me some feedback,good bad, or horrible
its a simple bluegrass song ive wrote some words too, they'r pretty weak and i dont know where to go with it, first time ive really tried writing
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headin down to memphis late in june
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im up the river headed back to you
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headin down to memphis late in june
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just looking for that girl i love
her eyes were as green as the trees
her lips were as red as a rose
her eyes were asd green as the trees
oh lord, her smiles what ripped right through me
thought i had a girl i could trust
thought she loved me sweet and true
thought i had a girl i could trust
but she was lookin right at you
i thought i had a friend i could trust
thought i had a buddy till the end
thought i had a friend i could trust
but she was lookin right at him
mental block::
thats it, ill try to post a link of me playin it so you can get a better idea
its a simple bluegrass song ive wrote some words too, they'r pretty weak and i dont know where to go with it, first time ive really tried writing
G
headin down to memphis late in june
C ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;G
im up the river headed back to you
C;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;G;;;;Em
headin down to memphis late in june
G;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;D;;;;;G
just looking for that girl i love
her eyes were as green as the trees
her lips were as red as a rose
her eyes were asd green as the trees
oh lord, her smiles what ripped right through me
thought i had a girl i could trust
thought she loved me sweet and true
thought i had a girl i could trust
but she was lookin right at you
i thought i had a friend i could trust
thought i had a buddy till the end
thought i had a friend i could trust
but she was lookin right at him
mental block::
thats it, ill try to post a link of me playin it so you can get a better idea
"The flame from your stage has now spread to the floor"