Well, for your next video, I'd suggest showing us your guitar instead of your mug. No offense, but kind of pointless to just watch you the whole time without seeing your guitar & what you're playing, you know?
Also, the vocals were a little loud, almost clipping out at times, but other than that, I thought you did a very good job and I liked the echo effect you had on, a nice Jerry-esque touch.
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