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Looking for some feedback

Postby hesgone95 » Mon May 04, 2009 8:54 pm

Hey all, it's been awhile. For those of you who remember me, you remember that I was the Mexico contigent for a long while. Well, I've been back in the States for a few months, looking for a job (no luck yet) and bouncing around this great land...I've finally settled in Austin for awhile (there are worse places), and I'm lucky enough to have some semblance of a recording studio in my apartment so I've been working on some of my original stuff. Anyway here's a link to one of my songs called 'Jive Idea'.

http://www.reverbnation.com/fredbraley

All feedback is welcome and invited. Please keep in mind this is really rough, recorded on a broken Yamaha classical (my Larivée is still in Boston, real long story) with a $20 mic on my cheap, low-end sound card. But it's not bad for what it is, and I'm Grateful to finally be in a place to work on this stuff and lay it down.

Anyway, I'm all ears...thanks...
Goin' home, goin' home
By the waterside I will rest my bones
Listen to the river sing sweet songs
To rock my soul
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Re: Looking for some feedback

Postby hesgone95 » Wed Jun 24, 2009 2:05 pm

So I finally got another song posted up on the above link, and still wouldn't mind hearing some feedback. Unless the absolute silence is people's way of telling me I suck. :oops:
Goin' home, goin' home
By the waterside I will rest my bones
Listen to the river sing sweet songs
To rock my soul
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Re: Looking for some feedback

Postby Tennessee Jedi » Wed Jun 24, 2009 2:24 pm

I checked out Cascading Rain
Thought it was cool - had a Zepplin-esque feel to it.
Nicely done.
I'll give it 3 :D out 5 :D
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Re: Looking for some feedback

Postby NashvilleMike » Wed Jun 24, 2009 4:06 pm

I liked "Jive idea" best. They are both melodic and I believe would lends themselves to some good lyrics. I have no idea why but it put me in the mind of Melanie

as in....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZIFknAdVvNM
It all rolls into one and nothing comes for free
There's nothing you can hold for very long
And when you hear that song come crying like the wind
It seems like all this life was just a dream
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Re: Looking for some feedback

Postby hesgone95 » Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:22 pm

Thanks, Cascading Rain actually has lyrics, but I didn't feel like singing after all the takes and mixing etc of the song itself. It's amazing how many hours it can take to record two guitar parts for a 7 minute song. Even when you know both parts backwards and forwards. Anyway thanks for the feed back.
Goin' home, goin' home
By the waterside I will rest my bones
Listen to the river sing sweet songs
To rock my soul
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